Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sent

Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences.原文:我们的信息技术取得了一个又一个辉煌胜利。 译文:Our information technology has won one brilliant victory after another.改译:
【正确答案】:

WE HAVE WON ONE BRILLIANT VICTORY AFTER ANOTHER IN INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY.


【题目解析】:原译文的主语选择错误,英语中主谓关系非常密切,information technology不能作won的主语,故需添加与之相搭配的主语we。在汉语中常有拟人化的表达,英语中句子主语主动语态中,句子主语一般是动作或行为的施动者,所以主语应该是we,in information technology表示在信息技术这一方面。